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Friday, February 5, 2010

Ocean

Author's Note: P.S.--I moved this poem from my "fun" blog so you might have already read it.....

The ocean's color blends in with the horizon
while it hides its true king Poseidon


The ocean's hides rocks galore
it even hides the Earth's core


Swim deeper into the ocean
and you'll have a great notion


That you should be quiet
or there might be a riot


For you have found a great big shark
its shadow,getting bigger, is gloomy and dark


As fast as you can swim higher and higher
until you break the word's swimming record and is someone to admire


Never forget your jorney in the great big blue
but never go back if it's only you.

1 comment:

  1. This is a really good poem, Hannah! I like how you made it rhyme.

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